What's happening of my storyboard are interesting, but the story is so weak. Some parts of my the movements can be used, they are quite funny, but I need to make my story stronger.
Notes:
1) Usually, the hero wants something, but what does he really need? How do I shape the story, so that he learns what he needs more than what he wants.
Nina Shorina-Door
We had better do something in a correct way, but we always do it in a wrong way, what control us? For example, we can see in this stop-motion film, after a long time compression, people forget how to go upstairs by the normal way, they use several way to do that. The old thing occupy his mind. This film give character reason of why they do that. I should do it in my own film. Give my character a reason for going outside, and do a comparison for inside world and outside world.
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